[The Making of MistClan] -- Remade Warrior Cats


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7:25am Jan 3 2011 (last edited on 8:10am Jan 3 2011)

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Talonstrike looked back at his makeshift nest, made out of fallen leaves, and sighed. "There'd better be somewhere we can make a camp or something out of." He grumbled. "Anyone hungry?" Not bothering to wait for a reply Talonstrike stalked a small mouse, who was half-awake, and wrestled with it with his paw before sending down a blow that stopped it's heartbeat. "I could eat for a moon." He crowed, shoving the mouse aside for anyone to eat.

Ash and Dew looked up as their housefolks scurried by, settling down to eat after a few minutes. "Bother! Why don't they ever fed us?" Ash grumbled. After a while they walked away, and Dew managed to find a scrap under the table. The door was swinging, they noted, and decided to walk outside.

How lovely the outside world was! They walked around for a while and ocas'sionally found scraps along the road. "A forest... Let's go!" Ash meowed, and walked alongside his sister.

 

Talonstrike scented the air. "Graypatch...Clovertail... Skyslash!"  He choked out. "I scent a few cats... maybe two or three ..." He looked around. "Scent of twolegs. Should be a lost kittypet. No harm checking them out." He decided.

 Ash saw a few figures ahead and dashed to them, knocking into Talonstrike. "I- I'm sorry!" He apologized hastily. "I was just...!" He didn't manage to finish his sentence and ate a small piece of mouse before realizing it was Talonstrike's kill. "I'm sorry again!" He meowed. "It had been so long since I ate!" Dew, on the other hand, just sighed, and held back her signs of hunger. 




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Farren let out an irritated hiss when one of the cats killed a mouse. "Could've been mine." He groaned, settling down on the tree branch to watch them. Two kittypets started feasting on the mouse, then started apologizing. "Kittypets should stay in their own homes where their precious housefolk would feed them." Farren scoffed. His grey tail hung from the tree branch, rather noticeable to the cats.
[[Just added the last part so maybe he would be discovered xD]]
 
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Skyslash observed the two kittypets. "Sorry doesn't catch the prey." He sighed, reciting a phrase he would hear his mother tell him. Skyslash eyed the two cats curiously. They had well-groomed fur and appeared to be well-fed, despite their protests of hunger. "You two... Are you kittypets?" He asked.



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"In the forest," Whiskers replied nonchalantly, giving the two a malicious grin. "You think I would caught dead in one of those two-leg nests? I don't even know how you could survive eating the kind of junk you do. Dry pellets, eesh." Shrugging his shoulders the loner glanced back at the forest, hoping the longing in his eyes wasn't too evident. "I have to get going. You can follow me, I guess, but be quiet or something. If I lose any prey to you two I'm taking the equivalent in flesh, got that?"

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"It's not that easy," Thomas muttered uncomfortably. "I mean, my littermates, newer litter, same mother and father, are back at my housefolks'. I can't just leave them, no matter how much they annoy me and cause me to be the one who doesn't get any attention. Besides that, I don't really know how to hunt. I'm just...figuring it out."

Sighing he looked up at the sky, but it was obscured by the long leafy branches of the trees surrounding him. "I guess I'm afraid to live here. I was born into a life of comfort, how am I supposed to change?"

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"If they are can we just send them on their way without doing any damage?" Graypatch meowed nervously, ducking behind Skyslash's comfortingly large form. "If these kittypets or whatever come home all bloody and scratched up, I doubt their two-legs would be very happy, and they might try to chase us out again." 





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"It's not like we like those pellets." Thrush muttered. Swallow nudged her brother and got up, eyes flashing with eagerness. "Of course we'd like to come along! We promise to be as quiet as possible, agreed?" Swallow flashed a look at Thrush. Thrush shrugged unenthusiastically and got up along with his sister. "So... where are we off to?" He asked, looking around. For the first time, Thrush noticed that the forest was rather large.
 
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Skyslash placed a tail on Graypatch's shoulder in a comforting manner. "Don't worry, Graypatch." He whispered. "I'm sure we'll get out of this without a fight. Besides, they show... promise, don't they?" He asked, giving the frightened cats a quick glance. Sure, they may be tamed, have full bellies and a well-groomed coat, but Clans had taken in kittypets and loners before.
 
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Icicle considered the tom's words. "I can help." She offered. "It's been a long time since I had a chance to talk to any cat." Icicle's eyes raked the tom's body. He definitely was a kittypet, with soft fur. But he was... kind of close to the mouse? "If you don't like just leaving your family... Why not visit them another time? I can come too, though kittypets don't like a dirty cat like me in their nice clean homes." Icicle's ex
pression fell for a few short seconds at the thought.



Detneth106

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[who are those cats? xD The one's with Graypatch and Skyslash and them. o-o]




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[[Twint's Dew and Ash c: They're kittypets.]]



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[Oh xD]

"Wherever," Whiskers meowed with a sigh. "To tell the truth there isn't much to do around the forest. Hunting, fighting, sleeping, I guess that it. I mean, seriously, being a wildcat isn't all fun and games." Shaking his head wryly Whiskers nodded his head in the direction of a small, slightly visible pathway. "We'll be going there. A lot of mice frequent the area since two-legs like to throw crumbs to the birds."

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"I guess," Graypatch meowed uncomfortably. "But still, I'm worried. We're all so tired and weak, and really, could we even stand against those kittypets if they have any fighting knowledge?" Right now, at this moment in time, any cat that Graypatch didn't know well sent her into a fit of worry and anxiety. The forest was large and the cats possibly dangerous. Not a good combination for a nervous she-cat.

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Thomas shrugged. "I guess, but am I really cut out for this? And besides, I doubt they'd recognize me if I came back after living in the forest. I'd probably be all ragged and thin, so I wouldn't even look like myself." Sighing at this conundrum Thomas wondered if he really should take up the she-cats offer. After all, it was an enticing one, and Thomas didn't exactly have anything to lose. 





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Swallow shrugged. "Alright, whatever you say." She said. Her front paw twitched to move forwards, but stopped when a bundle of brown fur rushed past her. "Come on!" Thrush mewed enthusiastically. Swallow sighed. "He... really likes exploring." She explained to the dark-furred tom.
 
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[[I suppose we should wait for Twint on this one o3o ]]
 
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Icicle sat down, considering his problem. "Well, I meant visit them now." She said. "If you don't want to, I'll leave." Icicle sighed at that thought. "I just don't want to force you into anything... What's your name?" She asked. "I don't think I got it. My name's Icicle." 



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"O-oh!" Dew was slightly offended. "Our housefolk... they didn't really care for us and we just... wanted to try hunting like how the wild cats do in the forest... we hope we haven't tresp*censored*ed on your territory!" The last few words came out in a rush before Dew calmed down and continued, "Besides... the food wasn't even exactly the best ; we fell sick from them before, when the twoleg kits mixed them with some weird water or something. Little bubbles would come out of nowhere when they rubbed their paws!"

Ash noted a tail hanging down from a tree. "Hey!" He meowed. "Another cat!" His blue gaze was fixed on the tail - he wished he was able to climb like that - his housefolk never let him jump on the furniture!

Talonstrike looked in the direction of Ash's gaze. "Ah, we shouldn't bother. It's probably just another rogue. And territory?" He questioned. "We barely have any..." His voice trailed off, uncertain. "Skyslash? Graypatch?" He called, and in a lower voice, asked , " What do we do with them? They cant mean us any harm - they already look rather weak." 




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Farren's tail shot back up the tree, curling around his  body. When the kittypets mentioned about trespas-sing on their territory, Farren's ears twitched in annoyance. He leapt down smoothly from the tree. "Actually, it's my hunting territory." He said emotionlessly. Farren finally had a chance to get a good look at the cats. One cat had ugly scars that raked his body, causing Farren to shiver a little. This cat was obviously a cat not to be trifled with.
 
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Skyslash shrugged. "I say we do nothing. Unless they want to... learn." He murmured the last bit in a hopeful tone. These cats showed promise... right? 



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"We don't have any," Graypatch muttered curtly, glaring at the three strangers. Well, the two kittypets and one rogue's tail. Or loner. "Which doesn't really matter. Kittypets are fine, but a rogue or loner? I'd rather steer clear of them." Crouching down and circling around Skyslash she gave the kittypets an appraising look, feeling slightly intimidated by their fluffy, thick bodies and the confident way they seemed to hold themselves. Security, safety, this makes them feel so strong and powerful. They don't know of the real forest.

Turning her flat gaze to the rogue she curled back her lip and snarled. "This is our territory until we say otherwise!" she growled fiercely, the hair along her shoulders and back prickling with rage. Short yet thorn-sharp claws slid out of her paws and curled into the dirt, gouging small holes in the ground.

[Maybe Graypatch could have a crush on Farren? xD]

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"Yeah, yeah," Whiskers meowed, feeling stupid for inviting the kittypets along. If they did survive in the forest, there'd only be less prey for him and other cats. And besides that, they were healthy, strong and obviously hadn't had to fight for their life at any point in time. Padding forwards he slipped in front of them and waved his tail, heading into the forest. "This way," he sighed.

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"Thomas," Thomas meowed awkwardly. "It doesn't really mean anything. Since I'm guessing you're called Icicle because of your pelt and all." Shrugging his shoulder he glanced back in the direction he thought the two-leg nest in which he had been born in and grown up in was. "I don't really want to go back...maybe I could survive here." 





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[[Butbut... Twint already asked if Ash could later crush on Graypatch so I wuz like o~o]]
 
Farren glared at the gray she-cat. "Oh, I suppose you didn't smell my scent all over this area then?" He asked in a deadly calm voice. "Just because I travel alone doesn't mean that I don't have... a home." He finished lamely. Farren's tail, which used to stick proudly up in the air, drooped a little when he realized what he was up against. Three cats? And what if those stupid Two-leg loving cats joined in?
 
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Swallow didn't notice the way the tom acted. Instead, she cheerfully followed her brother, wondering if her housefolk would ever be happy with her bringing back a mouse or two for them.
Thrush looked equally happy, his paws prickling with energy at the thought of finally being able to catch something, maybe. Swallow was a much better hunter, and had brought down a mouse or two once.
 
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Icicle shook her head, her eyes sparkling with laughter. "No, I chose this name because my mother gave it to me. She saw those little icicles hanging from a rock near our den, and then turned to see my equally white pelt, back then when my markings didn't look too visible." Icicle sighed. At least, that was what her father had told her. She got up, eager to forget what she had just said. "So, you coming with me?" She asked. "Because there's lots to learn." Icicle grinned.
 
[[Hrm... I suppose they could all coincidentally collide where the Clan cats are xD ]] 



Detneth106

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[Really? o-o Love triangle? xD Sort of. ;D And I'll reply in a bit.]




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[[ Nuo D< I don't like love triangles. I have one in school, and it's !@#$ing annoying :U ]]



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[Fine D:]




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Detneth106

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[Someone needs to find my kittypets :< I don't know who they should meet.]

"You guys probably won't catch anything," Whiskers meowed smugly, before waving his tail in their faces to stall any words they might have decided to share with him. "Hush," he mewed softly, crouching down in the soft loam and pricking his ears. Blinking his dark brown eyes the black tom began creeping forwards as quietly as he could, his entire body bent low to the ground so he was shielded by the long gra.ss stalks.

Twitching his whiskers and opening his mouth to taste the air the loner pinpointed the position of the mouse, his eyes darting nervously from side to side as he got ever closer to his prey.

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"Like what?" Thomas asked, his eyes brightening with new enthusiasm. "Hunting? Or fighting?" Fidgeting he side-stepped around the she-cat and wondered what she could teach him. "Imagine," he meowed softly, his eyes glowing brightly. "A whole knew world out here for me to explore and learn from. For once in my life...I feel excited."

 





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[[Where's Spot and Mila? 8u Maybe I can have Dove collide with them somewhere]]
 
Icicle grinned at the tom's ex
pression. "First of all, er, Thomas," Icicle made her way to the front of the tom, sitting down and straightened her posture. "Hunting is the most important thing. No food, no chance of living. Hunting is second most important. You'll have a few fights over food and territories and such." Icicle shrugged. "But it's no big deal. Sometimes you just have to look scary to frighten off a few cats."
 
 



Detneth106

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[They're sort of just in the forest-ish. :P]




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[[A-hmm... And now would be a good time for Whiskers, Thrush and Swallow to meet Graypatch, Skyslash, Talonstrik, Ash and Dew? Oh dear we have a lot of cats xD ]]



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[We do. xD Uh...pretty soon, I'd imagine. I could make Graypatch scout ahead 'cause she feels uncomfortable around the kittypets and the rogue. :D]




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