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7:44pm Apr 6 2010
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One day little Alice was sitting in her room when her mother came up stairs and said she was going to dinner with father. Little Alice was told to stay n the house and not to be wild and crazy. And the most important rule, do not answer the door About 30 minutes went by and she heard a knock on the door. Alice went to her bedroom window and looked down to see who it was. She did not recognize the man. --------------------- Bio- Name: Alice Lila Truby Age: 10 Gender: Female Looks: short blonde hair with little bangs, brown eyes Personality: Loves to play barbies and is very nice to other people. she is very polite and always says please and thank you. |
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8:50pm Apr 6 2010
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Jack looked down at the small girl, his intentions becoming clear. "Hello, Alice." He growled, stepping into the room and closing it behind him. "How was your day? I'm Joker."
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8:55pm Apr 6 2010
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Suddenly, Amie, Alice's sister ((Wee, I love twisting things up a bit ;D)) appeared from the stairs. "Why are you in our house?" She asked the man, putting her hands on her hips. Amie was a typical seventeen year old; she had a strong attitude and lots of confidence.
We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.
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8:57pm Apr 6 2010
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"Shut up," Jack sneered at her, effectively kicking her down the stairs. He grabbed her at the foot of the flight, bringing her into the room and locking them in.
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9:03pm Apr 6 2010
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"God..." She paused, looking at her little sister, "I mean, Gosh Darnit, you let my little sister and I out of here right. now." Amie pounded on the door, purposely trying to annoy Jack. "Okay, listen, you can kill me, I don't give a....fudge, but c'mon, a ten year old? Really, dude, would you go that low?"
We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.
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9:42pm Apr 6 2010
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"I don't kill kids." Jack said, eying her like a an annoying bird. "And I'm not here to kill anyone." He added, sitting on the little girl's bed.
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9:47pm Apr 6 2010
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"Then could you tell me why you barge into my house, scare the heck out of my sister, and break my leg?" Amie asked, gripping her leg as she mentioned it. She groaned softly. It really hurt.
We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.
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9:50pm Apr 6 2010
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"Give me it, and I'll fix it." Jack said carefully, as the girl was getting on his nerves, and he didn't want to hurt Alice. "I'm here to take Alice away from this godforsaken family," Jack explained, as he gripped her leg. He gave it sharp tug, pulling the bone back into place. He grabbed a little wooden chair from a corner, easily breaking it with his bare hands. He grabbed two semi-long legs, taking a bed sheet and effectively making a splint for her leg.
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9:55pm Apr 6 2010
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"Why would you take her away?" Amie said, confused. "And, er, thanks."
We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.
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10:30pm Apr 6 2010
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"Because she needs to get away from here. This family is ALWAYS away from her and she does not deserve that." "B-but i don't want to go with you at all! i love this family!" said little Alice. " Alice don't worry i won't let him take you. not without a fight." Amie told Alice. (by the way you guys are doing great with this story! just i DO NOT like that bad words at all.
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9:07am Apr 7 2010
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((You're powerplaying. x_x...You can't make other characters say things. But, oh well, I think you're new, so I'll let it goo (:)) Amie put her arms around her little sister for protection and kissed her forehead.
We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.
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10:11am Apr 7 2010 (last edited on 10:16am Apr 7 2010)
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((are you talking about me? yes i am new i started all this tuesday april6 2010)) poor little Alice did not want to go so she held on tight to Amie. she held on tp her like there was no tomorrow. "Come Alice now." "NO! you can't make me!!!"Alice replied. |
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2:35pm Apr 7 2010
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((Yes I am. And you did it again. I'll say it again. YOU CANNOT CONTROL WHAT OTHER CHARACTERS DO AND ACT. Your character is Alice. You control what Alice does. Not what Jack does, or what Amie does, but Alice. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but...))
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7:21pm Apr 7 2010
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((Paige is right, Pan. You can't.)) "Come, Alice." JAck mimicked, crouching down to her level and opening his arms for her. "Easy way.. Or hard way..." |
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7:23pm Apr 7 2010
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"I'm not letting you take her!" Amie growled, clenching to her sister only tighter.
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12:55pm Apr 8 2010
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(( ok sorry i didn't know i am still really new to this i am sorry :( i'll try to do better)) "No i won't go with you! You can't make me! Amie please please don't let him take me away from are family!" |
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2:01pm Apr 8 2010
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((It's all right. ^_^)) "I won't, Alice, I promise."
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3:50pm Apr 8 2010
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(( thanks. hey btw, do you want to be friends?)) " thank you Amie. But how will you make him leave? I mean really. He just broke your leg by not even really trying to. man i hope mom and dad get here soon." |
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3:54pm Apr 8 2010
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[[ Oooh! I know who to bring in here! That is, if you'll let me join. ]]
Nothing can stop the US Air Force except lightning within five nautical miles.
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4:56pm Apr 8 2010
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(( Dragonstar, you can join if you want to that is why the ti
tle is like it is. so go ahead if you really want to and your character is going to be playing alot in this story or something. thank you. and have a lot of fun!)) |
