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chance437

9:36pm Apr 10 2010

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"They want you, but you seem harder to comply." Jack laughed. "Plus, you don;t want to come with me for the reasons they want you to."



paigecam

9:39pm Apr 10 2010

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"Why do they want me to?" Amie asked. "And, you should tell me. They are my parents and I have every right to know."



We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.

chance437

9:45pm Apr 10 2010

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"Well, since possession is nine-tenths of the law, I believe I have every right not to tell you." Jack grinned. 



Pancakez

11:17pm Apr 10 2010 (last edited on 11:18pm Apr 10 2010)

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"Hold on here. My parents don't even know anybody named jack. Isn't that right Amie? Anyway here is a present for you jack!!" as Alice said this she bit jack on the hand as hard as she could. then she screamed as loud as she could in his ear just to make him mad.

(( i know you just wanted to express her feelings but still please TRY not to use those words. :) 

paigecam

9:27am Apr 11 2010 (last edited on 12:19pm Apr 11 2010)

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((Okay Then. Sorry about that. ^^"))

"No, I don't think they do. They've never talked about a Jack," Amie agreed.

"You know, you remind me of someone..."

((Hahaha Heath Ledger >:D)) 




We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.

chance437

12:01pm Apr 11 2010

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((No one said his name was Jack... Can you please edit your post.))

 

"That's because they know be by The Joker." Jack sneered, as the moonlight hit his face, illuminating his paint. He grabbed Alice by the throat, growling.

"I have a pain tolerance that is higher than you are. So you need to stop, or I'll bring you to your parents in a wheel chair." 




paigecam

12:03pm Apr 11 2010 (last edited on 12:05pm Apr 11 2010)

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((Eidted 'cause Paige fails epically.))

"Don't you dare grab her like that, you could hurt her!"




We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.

chance437

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((He grabbed Alice by the neck, not Amie.))



paigecam

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((Oh. x_x"

How much do I fail?))




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chance437

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((Lol, Pagiey. Everyone fails sometime. You could've left the Jack bit, though))

 

"I will do as I please." Jack growled, squeezing her tighter. 




paigecam

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((Darn. I have huge writer's block/failingness today.))

"No, please," Amie pleaded. "She's just a little kid, she won't be able to take that."

Suddenly a blaze of pain raced through her leg again, and she screamed.




We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.

Pancakez

4:03pm Apr 11 2010

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" jack please....... i can't breathe i'll stop!"

said Alice in a low voice. she did not want jack to kill her by chocking her.

(( LOVE  where this story is going! you guys are doing awesome! keep up the good work!!)) 

chance437

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"Don't worry, I can't kill you yet." Jack laughed, letting her go and catching her. He grabbed her by the hair, growling in her ear.

"Now, shall you listen?" He growled, sounding like a jungle cat.

 

((No problem, Pan. We are professionals xD)) 




Pancakez

4:21pm Apr 11 2010

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" what will happen if i don't? will you kill me or something?" said alice in a sarcastic tone.
chance437

4:23pm Apr 11 2010

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"I will, actually." Jack grinned menacingly.



Pancakez

4:28pm Apr 11 2010 (last edited on 8:16pm Apr 14 2010)

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" ok sorry go ahead i'll listen." alice replied a little scared, with a shaky voice.
chance437

6:55pm Apr 16 2010

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"You better" Jack answered, laughing.



Pancakez

3:51pm Apr 18 2010

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"i'd run away from you if i could. But i can't cause you are holding on to me so tightly" alice said to jack.
paigecam

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Amie sighed. "Will you take me, too? Just so I know that my sister's safe. Please," She begged.



We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.

Pancakez

7:49pm Apr 18 2010

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" ya please? i won't go with you unless you let amie come with us." alice said increasing the begging.
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