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dogpaw49

11:56am Aug 29 2011 (last edited on 10:50am Sep 2 2011)

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This is about a tidal wave approaching to ript/ssrv.cgi" class="cerr">Atquati on account of ofript/ssrv.cgi">Scria's wind.Scria is getting blown away by huge winds.Reiflem is bursting  on account of ript/ssrv.cgi">Scria is launching into it.Relicore is being slaved by ript/ssrv.cgi">Kir, the head of the performance. The  story begins in a jail cell because some ript/ssrv.cgi">creatu are in jail on account of they are ript/ssrv.cgi">biengslaved   it leads to a journey. The creatu survivors help to turn the  planets normal again. 
 
 
 
 
 
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 ript/ssrv.cgi">Creatu: Albino Omni 
  
Gender: Female 

Part: Investigator and fighter!! 

Nickname: ript/ssrv.cgi">Cas  

Appearance: has a red heart shaped cut and 3rd tail is ripped. Her flaws are that sometimes her legs lock and she cannot move. Sometimes her brain will mess up and for a while she cannot talk. She is protective . 

Back story: Was slaved and Her old servant That turned on her  cut her and ripped her tail because she was trying to escape the jail inript/ssrv.cgi">Reiflem. Smart and Has well senses.Her Team Always Comes first.She Is Talkative but sensitive. She might hurt herself  a lot but she is young. 




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Dartmith

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Gender: Male

Part: Fighter
Nickname: Ren his full name is Renagage

Appearance: Ren is large black Mieko. His tail is slightly singed at the end and his wings have small holes in them towards the edges and has a chain on his front right leg from past experiences.

Back story: Ren was one of the few creatu to be enslaved in Reflem which is the reason for the chain on his right front leg. He never really was very vocal but even more so now. Since he barly talks he uses nods and other gestires with his tail to signal what he means, or he just wont repond at all. He does have built up rage inside of him but is farly good at keeping it bottled inside.




dogpaw49

7:32pm Aug 29 2011 (last edited on 7:33pm Aug 29 2011)

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Acepted!

Lets start(people can join anytime)

Oww Cas Moaned!Covered In Dirt and laying in a cell in Reflem

She looked at her tail!She remembered what happened *back story*..."Be Quiet You Dispicable Creatu " a mean Vogar Said!!"What Are You Doing" Said Cas!Suddenly She Kicked With All Her Might!!"Ohh No You Don't!" the mean vogar said and cut half her tail off!"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Cas wept as her tail was acheing!!"Be Quiet.Take this poo lolypop" the vogar said!!Then he walked away."Bleeeaaachhhh"Cas Said as she threw it accros the floor!*back to the place*"Is Anyone there!Hello"Cas said as she was still acheing in pain!




Dartmith

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((So I'll just assume that we are starting from their back stories...))

Ren was laying in his cage his head placed on his paws as he listened to a creatu some cages away screaming in pain as she was being assulted by one of the Vogar's. He stared out the front of the cage his blinking minimal. He hated to hear anyone like that but what could he do? He had tried that once before and nothing came out of that besides a burned tail and a chain securing him to his heavy steel cage. He hadn't been fed in days and his breathing was slightly laybored because of it but he acted as if he was fine. He never showed any sign of weakness even before he had been enslaved. Thats just how he was raised. Ren would say that his parents had raised him well. He wasn't someone who thought that he was better than anyone else though he didn't really think he had any special talents either but what did he care now since he was stuck in this rotten cage that smelled of suage and flithy Vogar.




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((I'm sorry But I have to go too my friends house so I wont be able to reply is you post soon. I don't know when I'll be back but when I am back I'll be sure to post here.))



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dogpaw49

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what does that mean?No really,Im stumped!(im not trying to sound mean.i actually mean what does  illiterate mean



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anyways...

"what should i do "Cas said?I guess ill sing cas said.She sung the blues.Then Suddenly she notased a Male Meiko!"Hello?" Cas said.no reply.She peered closer and closer and she acksidently banged her head on the wall!She got knocked out!Then later she woke up and notased something!She Could Get Out!She Just Had To Climb up the wall!It was so simple!But she didnt wana leave the Meiko Behind!He Looked Misteryus,yet kind!She desided To Help Him!She Eskaped out the front door and climbed up the wall!She climed across the celling and droped!She almost got caut but she quickly scurred up the wall!Then the droped and opened his door!"Hello?What Is Your Name?You Dont Look like  you talk alot.I Know Creatu Sign Language!




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Ooc; It means, you don't have proper grammar, spelling, and your posts aren't very intelligent. Not sounding rude or anything >:(



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dogpaw49

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does he mean me or him!Im only 9 but i am verry sorry i cannot spell some words correct!Ill learn soon beacause on september 6 i am going to be in the 5th grade



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lets continue



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One, I am female, two, I think you should learn some spelling and grammer, and three: if you want, I can teach you how to properly roleplay. Without all the exclamation points.



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9:04pm Aug 29 2011 (last edited on 9:07pm Aug 29 2011)

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Please stop spaming.I dont mind so lets just continue...this is what i said before!

 "what should i do "Cas said?I guess ill sing cas said.She sung the blues.Then Suddenly she notased a Male Meiko!"Hello?" Cas said.no reply.She peered closer and closer and she acksidently banged her head on the wall!She got knocked out!Then later she woke up and notased something!She Could Get Out!She Just Had To Climb up the wall!It was so simple!But she didnt wana leave the Meiko Behind!He Looked Misteryus,yet kind!She desided To Help Him!She Eskaped out the front door and climbed up the wall!She climed across the celling and droped!She almost got caut but she quickly scurred up the wall!Then the droped and opened his door!"Hello?What Is Your Name?You Dont Look like  you talk alot.I Know Creatu Sign Language!




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Creatu: sepia zenirix

Gender: male

Part: fighter

Nickname: rue(short for ruevan)

Appearance:

Back story: ..it has something to do with... the loss of family.. and loss of senses... he may be blind but he always gets his way. once when he was just a baby he wandered into a cave. he got trapped in the tunnels and ended up losing his sight from being in the dark so long. when he got out, he became scared. tight, cramped spaces make him feel comfortable now.

 

[please excuse the lack of capital letters, my keyboard's not letting me use the shift button.]




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Dartmith

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Ren looked up when he saw the small albino creatu infront of him. She had opened his cage and he was greatfull but he had to admit it was kind of stupid to risk your lfe for someone you don't know. She stood up shaking his body and hearing the clanking on the chain on his right front leg and held it out to the creatu his way of saying that it was kind of hard for him to get out. "I'm not a mute." He said simply and pointed his muzzle to the name scribbled on a card that had been put on his cage. He could tell right off the bat this creatu would be a talker and he wasn't one for conversation obviously. Maybe I could eat it? Ren thought to himself. It's small enough and thought would make me less hungry. Ren dicided against that though concidering how it had, for lack of a better word, saved him.



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(accepted!)

 

Then Cas said "Hi  Renagage!May I Call You Ren?One Sec".Then she dashed to the wall and ran to him and he ran.He was scared.Im going to take off your chain.In sign language he said no.Then she had him climb on her back as they escaped out the window!She thought he was wondering about how she could carry him.So They left but the bad news was that Ren had landed on her and Cas's tail and face smashed against the ground!"Patoooee" she said as she spit out dirt and grass.Ren noticed that she got a heart shaped cut."ohh You Are Wondering About the Royal Omnis Ability?" Yes , Ill Tell you.When I was A Small girl i was born a girl royal Omni.My Mother Told Me About One Of My 1st gift out of 4 Gifts.Whenever i get hurt the cut immedianty turns into a heart, Which is the royal family's crest but sadly When i was 5 i was taken away to Reiflem by my old servant.I always told him  dont need help.They kept moveing me cell to cell.Years past and then i met you which changed my life.I dont want to be a princess.I want to fight with you!" She Said!




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((I would prefer if you didn't controll my character because if you do then I might as well just not rp here because you could do that by yourself. I'm sorry if I seem mean for saying that but I like for people if they do have a controll over my charras that it's minimal so that it would make a diffrence if I was actually role playing or not...))

Apparently the little creatue didn't know what mute ment but he didn't say anything. He knew some sign language so he told her that she better just leave before someone came but aparently she didn't like to listen either because she unlocked his chain anyway. Where she told him to get on her back he just looked at her and spread ou his wings and flaped them a couple times, "I have my own set." He said refering to his wings before he took a running start out of the entrance and into the sky. He swooped down after the creatu when she plumited to the ground. He wasn't sure if she was OK so he walked up to her nudging her body over with his snout. He saw the heart shaped cut on her body and was completly confused when she gave her explination but again didn't say anything. "Fight what with me?" He asked. His plan was go find home and figure out if his family was still alive and if they were then they would hide away together. That was the smart thing to do at least but the young creatu obviously hadn't learned that lesson in life yet.




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(i need you here.Please stay.i will not controll your charecter.if i start to do that please tell me)

Cas thought that He Didnt Know what she said."You do know what is happening right? Atquati My home planet is Flooding and Scria is getting washed away an even Reiflem is being broken away!We've gotta save everyone!I have a feeling you want to visit you're family so first we will go there.Then You will meet The Atquati royal family!I Miss my family.After that We could set out on our quest!




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