May i join? i am interested with this.

name: HawkHeart

warrior name: is a rouge now, but was banned for driving out her mate-to-be's murderer

age: is pretty old, about 3 years.

gender: She-cat

clan: rouge, but soon enters DuskClan's territory

rank: rouge

personality: shy, has certain visions of StarClan, and certainly always sad

 history: As a popular kit, she had a crush; StormKit. StormKit and HawkKit grew up together, hunted together, and were raised together. she hid various visions, but she knew StormClaw (older warrior name) was the one. as he became slowly a senior warrior, a rouge called "Tooth" had murdered him during his sleep. the next morning, she wakes up to dead StormClaw beside her. she burst into tears, told the clan about her visions after murdering Tooth, and was sent away after bearing StormClaws kit. her kit, SunKit, was taken by a clan called "SageClan" were she lived. one day, she met the new her called SunFur, and forced the truth to her. they roamed together, but weresplit in a flood on a river. she lived alone and sad, destin for a clan, but she never quite found her home.....

family: forbidden, but had one kit; SunFur. had a gealous sister named MistKit and two sweet brothers named MoonKit and StarKit (meant for to become an alive StarClan cat).

mate: deceased

looks: white with blended black,ginger, and light brown patches; long fur; unusually blue eyes; not stocky at all

The question is, will StarClan forbid this and turn down HawkHearts destiny....... 

i do know how to RP, btw, i have for two years now.

"Okay." Ignoring what Applesong said, Dragonfly continued her plan, and went straight to the warriors den. She fell asleepvery quick.

Dragonkit pounced on Hailkit. "Gotcha!" She purred. "Nuhuh! I'm too fast!" Hailkit twisted away, and ran as fast as his little legs could  make him go. Dragonkit caught up to him easily, and rammed him. "We'll be friends forever, right?" Dragonkit asked softly. "Yup!" Hailkit said happily. 

The scene changed, and in front of Dragonfly stood an apprentice Hailtwist. "Come back!" Dragonpaw said impatienly. Hailpaw said nothing, and kept walking. Hailtpaw started growing, stronger and bigger, and still kept walking. Dragonfly ran as fast as she could, but Hailtwist kept going further and further away. "Why are you leaving?" ragonfly yowled. Hailtwist kept walking. "I love you!" Dragonfly yowled. Hailtwist turned around and spat, "Do you really?" He then ran at a breakneck pace, leaving Dragonfly in the dust. Dragonfly sat down, and yowled. Her mind was racing. Have you gown away from me? Why did you have to do it, while in the process destroying my heart?

Dragonfly's eyes opened, and she panted. She felt like she had run araund all the territory, DuskClan and DawnClan territory stuck together.

quickly hides self in the gras's, smelling kits and clan cats.

"Thank goodness, they dont know im here!" She thought.

Hawkheart krept through the gras's, trying not to make a sound before accidentaly a bird flies out from the bushes beside her. 

and yes, yes we are using past tense.

btw, call me iam for short. 

((Look at our posts, then yours. See the difference? Your post should look like this:

 Ad when you're not roleplaying, but speaking to everybody, put (( At the beggining, and ))at the end.))

((ok.)) 

((-fixes-)) 

(( Imamaura- would it kill you to edit one post with both your bio and asking permission to join????? You always have to use OOC and you are not allowed to RP until you are accepted. Please edit your posts. Use correct capitalization and grammar in OOC, and add OOC to all your posts so I can tell what is and isn't your bio. Right now, you are not accepted. Again, please edit ALL your posts and add OOC, this is one of the things that most annoys me.

Also, some issues with your bio. First of all, it is not the format I gave you. The form has correct capitalization, making it a hundred times easier to read. 3 years is not old. And in the warrior name section, it would be N/A since your cat already has a warrior name. Another thing that sort of irks me is the name. It should be Hawkheart, not HawkHeart, same with all of the other names you use in her history, which I find VERY mary-sue ish. There is no, never will be, and never has been a Sageclan. Your cat cannot have the power to see visions from Starclan, only leaders medicine cats and prophecy cats can. On occasion, deputies will as well. I barely understand the rest of the history because of lack of correct grammar usage, punctuation, and poor word choice. I recommend completely re-doing your bio to my expectations, or just walk away from this RP.

Imam- If you don't feel like reading all of that, which is mainly just edits to your bio and OOC complaints, then just leave and don't come back. Sorry for the harshness of this statement, but after all, I am simply a cruel and evil person aren't I?)) 

Hailtwist squeezed out of his hiding place and groomed the dirt out of his fur. He heard Dragonfly walking past, and he looked. Up. He stared at her, almost emotionless.

"Can't catch me!" Hailpaw cried with joy, tearing up the tree and perching on one of the thinner branches. Dragonfly surely raced behind him. As she put her paws on the branch where he was, it shook hazordously. Hailpaw gasped, climging to the branch. Dragonpaw was falling. With a yowl, he jumped down after her, angling his tail to fall faster and move under her. He landed on his feet and crouched down. Dragonpaw landed on his back, causing no injury to either cats, other than Hailpaw's bloody paws. "Are you alright?" Hailpaw asked.

"I am, thanks to you. You saved me" Dragonpaw answered, somewhat dazed.

Hailpaw licked Dragonpaw's ears. "We're best friends, that's what we do." he purred. He heard the sharp, commanding meow of Hornetwing, his mentor. "Duty calls" Hail paw said, his fur spiking at the sound of his harsh mentor.

"How will you explain your paws Hailpaw?" Dragonpaw asked guiltily.

"I'll tell her that I tried my paw at fishing and cut myself on the rocks." Hailpaw said. "Go back to camp." he said. Dragonpaw purred and pounced back to her own mentor. 

Hailtwist sighed. Hornetwing hadn't believed him then, but she didn't pry. Did she find out when she joined Starclan only a moon after that? Was she watching him now. Hailtwist blinked and sighed. His ear flicked, and he hoped that Dragonfly would come over. He would be sick with stress if he had to walk.