Fireclan:Silverkit's tale


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Avocado

8:25pm Mar 22 2010 (last edited on 2:35pm Aug 11 2010)

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     There is a long told prophecy, that a silver pelted cat shall be born on the night of a full moon...the kit, being the smallest, will become a warrior last....but soon after being made a warrior, the cat encounteres a journey he needs to take to save the whole forest from certain destruction....

 Lightningstar enters the dark humid den where his mate is birthing."Woodfur" he says smiling and nuzzling her."How are the kits coming along?" he askes."good replies the dark brown she cat." I'm expecting three more" she says.Lightningfur stays with her until she is finally done birthing.She points her paw to a light brown she cat "Lightkit" she says.Next she points to a dark tan tom "Shroudkit".Then she points to a black tom and says "Shallowkit". And finally she points to a small silver tom and says "Silverkit"...........

A small black she-cat with white toes awoke, slipping out of the medicine cat's den. Her icy blue eyes scanned the FireClan's camp clearing, and she smiled,seeing all was calm. Pureheart -as the she-cat was called- slipped to the Fresh-kill Pile,  licking her black chops. The she-cat selected a mouse. She slipped under a tree and began her meal. Her black ears flicked to the sound of mewling kits in the nursery. Pureheart smiled, recalling that kits had recently been born.
Pureheart woke abruptly.Starclan had sent her a message in her dreams."A mistakeful Warriorship will put the forest in disater" they said.She could not understand.Slipping out of the medicine cats den Pureheart was relieved to find that all was calm.She trotted over to the fresh kill pile, whick was low on mice, and selected a plump water vole, her favorite.She cuddled under a big oak tree and began her meal.Her black ears pricked forward to the sound of mewling kits.She recalled that kits had been born to Woodfur the night before, and she remembered the small silver one.She wondered what lie ahead for the small helpless kit, and his littermates....

Silverkit helplessly mewed, painfully trying to open his eyes. He then wriggled to a source of his mother's scent and began to suck on something incredibly soft, a bland liquid entering his mouth. He had no choice but to drink this liquid if he wanted to survive.He felt the warmth of his littermates as he snuggled in for a long nap....

Woodfur:I see them snuggle together for a nap..my beatiful little kits...and yet, I feel they have no great destinys at all..I shake my head to get the horrible thought out. Nonsence! I say to myself as i notice silverkit.Why is he so much smaller than the others? I think as I nap with my kits.

 

Rules:no cursing, be nice, be creative, and have fun ;D

Bios!

Name:

Clan:

Looks:

Personality:

Crush/Mate:

Kits:

Position:

Other:

OK LETS RESTART THIS THREAD! WOOT!

Fireclan:

Earthclan:

Iceclan:

Lightclan:




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ssather

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((Is there a plot of something to this? I love your user name by the way.XD))



Wrathblood

8:31pm Mar 22 2010

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Wheeeee~ I shall rp my Clan kitteh. She's in ThunderClan. Here's her info:

Name: Pureheart

Gender: She-cat

Clan: ThunderClan

Deion: Pure black she-cat with icy blue eyes and white toes.




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Krillacreat

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((Erin, when a user just simply puts up a simple story like that, I consider it spam. Could you add plot, bio, rules, co-owners, and a who's who list?))




ssather

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((*Nods* I can maybe help with the plot or something...?))



Wrathblood

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Pureheart slipped into the nursery, smiling. "Congradulations." The black she-cat purred, blinking her icy blue eyes in contentment. She loved the feeling and the smeel of the nursery. Warmth, comfort, the smell of milk. All of it made her just want to curl up and spend all of Greenleaf within the nursery. Pureheart looked at Silverkit, sensing something about the kit. "He's gorgeous. They all are."



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Avocado

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okies guys, plz help with plot ssather, and thx for buying at my rancher ;D



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Avocado

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niice wrath ;D



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flowerstar

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Flamepelt (the medicine cat) looks up at Woodfur, "Lovely names. They are strong kits."



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Krillacreat

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((And so can I. An idea- There's a prophecy stating that on the birth of Silverkit, a war shall be started. Many moons shall pa-ss and then his family and crush'd be killed. He shall want to get revenge, but he doesn't want to harm others, so he plans to gather up other warriors and end the war.))




ssather

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((Okay, so I was thinking, since it sounds like it is about Silverkit that it could be something like this:

 A fire has destroyed the forest in Fireclan leaving them no cover from preditors and a lot of the pray has moved on to places with more plants. A single kit is born that must go on a journey to find new territory on the dya it turns 6 moons. Five friends will come with it. Will they find a new home or was it follish for Starclan to send out such young cats for a job so dangerous?

 

 Okay so that is all I have so far on it. If you have any ideas to imporve you cna edit it.XD))




Wrathblood

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Nice!




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ssather

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((Oh, I like Krilla's better.XD))



Avocado

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ooh, those r good guys..



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Wrathblood

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( As Silverkit continues throughtout the journey, he will meet so many friends, challenges, and enemies. But will the kit learn the value of what he's doing for his Clan? And, will he be able to handle the obstacles, or has StarClan made a foolish mistake.)



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flowerstar

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My cat: Can I be the Medicine Cat?

Name: Flamepelt

Rank: Medi cat

Clan: Thunderclan

Deion: orange pelted she-cat with green eyes and stripes down her back




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Krillacreat

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((That's what you get when I'm listening to J-pop. XD Good ideas rollin' out of my short, short sleeves.))




Wrathblood

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:D



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ssather

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((Okay so which one are we going to do?))



Wrathblood

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(I vote ssather's!)



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