12:09am Nov 24 2010
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(em, i mean whatever you think would bring more plot or action to the story))
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12:45am Nov 24 2010
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Riku watched as his father walked in from the living room. His father was taller than he was and much more built. However, his adoptive father did use drugs and other substances to perform better. He sat down and began to eat. He glared at Riku. "Why you .. You worthless kid! You didn't make the meat soft enough! My teeth aren't as good as they used to be!" He stood up, towering over Riku. Riku trembled. What did he do wrong this time?! He cooking it for the same amouth of time as always. "I-I'm sorry father.. I-I'll cook you another one.." He turned around to open teh fridge. His father grabbed his shoulders and shoved him into the fridge. Riku slammed his chest and cheek into the fridge. He trembled more. "F-Father.. I-I didn't do anything wrong.." Riku's father grabbed him and drug him into the living room, where he had more room. He threw riku onto the table, breaking a vase on Riku's back. Riku coughed up blood and rolled off the table. He panted and stood up. He punched his father square in teh jaw, which only upset him more. "You little!" He grabbed Riku and took out a pocket knife. He shreded Riku's shirt and sliced open teh scar on Riku's chest. He carried Riku and walked to a window. "Don't you dare do that again!" The threw riku out the window, shards flying onto the gr*censored* and stabbing Riku's hand and back. Riku stayed alying on the gr*censored*. He finally sat up after a few minutes and stumbled out the gate. He had to get away. He ran clumsily toward the orchestra dome, hopeing nobody would be there.
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1:05am Nov 24 2010
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(i hope i wasnt controlling your character :/ if so tell me) Sunni looked up towards the position of the deep orange sun in the now setting sky. She knew it was time to meet Riku at the stadium. She smiled to herself and climbed of the roof from the trellis her feet splashing in the cool gr*censored* and mud. Then she started to walk into the middle of the empty street, calm and relaxed humming to herself as the sun hit her warming herself. The air was muggy and hot, smelling like fresh cut gr*censored* and earth. The feeling made her feel free like anything was possible.Sunni closed her eyes letting her happiness all soak in. Almost to the stadium,Til she heard someone walking infort of her.She slowly opened her eyes to see who it was at first her mind froze when she saw Riku stammering covered in blood “RIKU!!” Her voice screeched in cracked in fear.She ran up to him putting her arms around him to hold him up. “oh my gawd what happened,what happened!”but in the back of her mind sunni knew exactly what had happened it filled her heart with fear and sadness.Tears welled in her eyes.“its,its okay riku its okay im here im here”her voice smooth whispereing in his ear as she tried to hold back from sobbing.She slowly gided him to the gr*censored* to lay down
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1:16am Nov 24 2010
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(it's fine. He needed it XD) Riku let his body fall onto the cool gras.s and lettin ghis fast beating heart slow down. He looked at Sunni, color was gone form his face. "Ngh.. Don't worry about me.. Please don't." He could feel tears in his eyes. He never wanted to cry but he never wanted to keep this to himself. His father.. His abusive, sadistic father... He knew the pain on Riku's face was enough to make his father happy and to find more ways to torture him. He wasn't about to let his eyes well with tears. He kept them back and starred at Sunni. "I'm fine.... This... This happens all too much.." He closed his eyes slightly. "Just take me.. Take me to the dome... I wana fix myself.. There's a first aid kit there... Please.. Just take me.." He sat up painfully and it showed on his face. He stood and began to walked down the hill leading to the dome. "Come on.. mmh... I don't want anybody else to see me like this.. Especailly my little brother.." Kyin ran inside and dark house and up to his room. He put his art supplies away and walked dwon teh stairs. His father was happily eating a porkchop, rice, beans, and drinking a beer. He looked arounnd. Nothing seemed out of teh ordinary. THe broken window was now replaced, the shards cleaned from the gras.s and floor. "Father, where is Riku?" He walked over to his dad. "My boy, he's run off again. Don't you worry about him. Just go upstairs and paint something pretty or draw what you usually do." He smiled at Kyin.
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1:40am Nov 24 2010
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Sunni’s face was serious and deeply concerned ,tears welled up in her eyes she gulped trying to push them back, she needed to be strong for him. So she smiled weekly and nodded to his words.Then putting his arm around her so she could help Riku walk. She saw the pain in his face and she tried to brush it off,but she couldn’t. Sunni carried his weight up the hill trying to make it as easy as possible for him. “okay,im going to take you to the stadium, but im not leaving you there. Im staying with you…your to hurt to care for yourself now” She gulped and looked at his face then quickly looked away trying to not get upset. “and don’t protest against it,you need help riku..I might even need to take you to the hospital later okay..im not gonna let you die..not while im here”Her voice was serious and stern but with much sympathy and kindness behind it.Once the got to the hill she saw the stadium and carried him to the stage.
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1:40am Nov 24 2010
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Sunni’s face was serious and deeply concerned ,tears welled up in her eyes she gulped trying to push them back, she needed to be strong for him. So she smiled weekly and nodded to his words.Then putting his arm around her so she could help Riku walk. She saw the pain in his face and she tried to brush it off,but she couldn’t. Sunni carried his weight up the hill trying to make it as easy as possible for him. “okay,im going to take you to the stadium, but im not leaving you there. Im staying with you…your to hurt to care for yourself now” She gulped and looked at his face then quickly looked away trying to not get upset. “and don’t protest against it,you need help riku..I might even need to take you to the hospital later okay..im not gonna let you die..not while im here”Her voice was serious and stern but with much sympathy and kindness behind it.Once the got to the hill she saw the stadium and carried him to the stage.
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1:40am Nov 24 2010
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Sunni’s face was serious and deeply concerned ,tears welled up in her eyes she gulped trying to push them back, she needed to be strong for him. So she smiled weekly and nodded to his words.Then putting his arm around her so she could help Riku walk. She saw the pain in his face and she tried to brush it off,but she couldn’t. Sunni carried his weight up the hill trying to make it as easy as possible for him. “okay,im going to take you to the stadium, but im not leaving you there. Im staying with you…your to hurt to care for yourself now” She gulped and looked at his face then quickly looked away trying to not get upset. “and don’t protest against it,you need help riku..I might even need to take you to the hospital later okay..im not gonna let you die..not while im here”Her voice was serious and stern but with much sympathy and kindness behind it.Once the got to the hill she saw the stadium and carried him to the stage.
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12:02am Nov 25 2010
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Riku felt a little sorry for this girl. He made her se ehim like this, made her run over here just to hear him play some ugly song, and made her carry him because he was too weak to even move his legs. He looked at Sunni and when she carried him onto the stage, he walked over to a grand piano. He opened the bench and pulled out a first-aid kit. He clicked open teh case and took out a stitching needle and stitching thread. He threaded teh needle and quickly went to work stitching the wound on his chest. He finished up and took teh thread out. He rubbed a numbing gell on the wound and began to wrap it. He grabbed a cloth, wet it with the stadium sink and began to scrub his hair. He finished up, dried his hair and cleaned the blood from his body with the wet cloth. He dried himself and took out a shirt. He wrapped the rest of his wounds and put his shirt on, buttoning the buttons quickly. He placed everything back in the seat of the piano and he closed it. He sat down and looked at Sunni. "Would you like to sit with me? I would enjoy your company if you would sit with me." He patted the empty space next to him on teh rectangle seat.
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9:45pm Nov 25 2010
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"You sure your okay"Sunni gulped after just seeing him in agony,Riku was now about to play the piano.She looked down at her clothes she was drentched in his blood that had now dried a dark rust brown on her pants and shirt.But oddly she didnt care.Sunni walked over and sat down on the small black bench next to riku.She genuinely smiled at him,then turning her head to the grand piano her eyes wideneing at the ivory keys,such beauty with such beautiful music to resonate in the stadium.She sighed and looked at him "you cant go home..and looking at my clothes..well my grandma what she would do...niether can i....what should we do,sleep here?"her face was concerned,she had no idea what was going to happen when she got home,if she ever wanted to go home.SO much time and energy was used to keep her senile grandma alive and well it almost wast worth it anymore,a burden to her.Sunni wanted to be free of it.It didnt matter to her that she would be homeless she could do what she wanted.Finally after years of work."so i never got to know anything about you,"she qeustioned
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12:38am Nov 27 2010
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Riku looked at Sunni and gave her a weak smile. "I'm fine. and as for you wanting to know about me and my past or family or whatever you want to know, I'm not sure if you really want to know.. So, just ask me a question and I'd be glad to answer any question you want to know about me." He turned his attention to the piano now. The air was crisp as the dusk settled in and engulfed the night sky with darkness. He looked up and saw the stars had already begun to pop from the darkness like small holes in a fabric. He looked as the moon let it's light engulf the stadium with low but beautiful light. He looked at Sunni and then he knew what he would play. He turned his head and eyes back to the ivory keys of the grand paino. He breathed in deeply and let it out slowly. He closed his eyes and searched for the sheet music in his head. He let his hands and fingers search the keys before he began his song. The stadium filled with sound and melody from the piano. The music resonating from the half-dome of the stadium and then heading out toward the town. He opened his eyes and continued to play. (Riku's song- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0NfOJsoU90&feature=my_favorites&list=FLICTS5EMUw_o)
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2:30am Nov 27 2010
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Sunni slowly closed her eyes as she listened to the sweet music that bled through her heart and soul. She gulped, lowering her head to the floor, her long wavy brown her fell all around her face, covering it. She bit her lip, tears welling in her eyes. Clear crystals of sorrow running down her face. But somehow it wasn’t sorrow, something new, something she couldn’t explain in words. Sunni felt like she knew Riku through ivory and strings. But that couldn’t be true, after all they only met this morning. Opening her eyes to the floor she slowly lifter her head and looked at him. Tears streaming down her face. But her face still and perfect like porcelain, her tears weren’t ugly like pain and sadness, her face remained the same, eyes glistening. No, she didn’t cry for depression or agony, she cried for raw beauty and admiration of such a melody. She stayed silent looking over at him. Speaking would Sunni felt, would ruin it, her voice would crush the harmony that resonated in the muggy summer air.
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2:39am Nov 27 2010
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Riku finished his song and looked at Sunni. He wiped her tears gently with his thumb. He smiled slightly and knew she understood the song. He didn't see the sadness and sorrow in her tears. "Heh, you seem to cry when I end up playing. You shouldnt cry. Your too pretty." He turned his head to the stars and saw that more were appearing in the sky as the sun's final sliver creeped behind the mountains to leave the moon and darkness in it's wake. He smiled and looked at Sunni. "Alright, don't cry please. Your really not suposed to cry. I feel like you are showing pity for me. I don't need pity..." He put his hand on her shoulder and let his own eyes well with tears. Are you really going to cry? What would your father say if he saw you cry like that? You know he'll merely beat the crap out of your body and you can't do a thing about it. Riku's thoughts raced through his mind and he felt something inside. He knew he wanted the night to never end and to have the night just fade away slowly with the sound of his piano and this girl at his side. He let a tear escape his silver eyes and run down his suprisingly soft cheek and drop off his chin to land on his pants.
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3:01am Nov 27 2010
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Sunni smiled her golden eyes shining in the moonlight “its not…pity, I don’t cry for that…I cry for beauty there has to be a word stronger than beauty…stronger than what binds the earth together. But I cant think of one that could describe what you play.” Her voice slow and smooth as cream as serious as ever. Her eyes illuminated with admiration and understanding of everything he played, as one emotion and music.Her eyes looked at rikus face as a tear fell from it. She put her arms around him, but gently making sure she didn’t hurt any of his wounds or bruises. She stayed silent her heart mind raced raced. She put her face close to his,then gently pressed her lips against his kissed his cheek. Then pulled away in anger at what she had done. She gulped and grit her teeth what had she done? how stupid could she be?, after all they just met. “im sorry ,imsorry, please forgive I shouldn’t have done that..I understand if you want to leave”She turned her face away from his,im frustration at her action,after all they only just met and it was so uncalled for.
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11:52pm Nov 27 2010
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3:00pm Nov 29 2010
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8:42pm Nov 29 2010
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12:17am Nov 30 2010
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Riku blinked. For one, it was the first time he had been kissed anywhere, sadly. He looked at how she reacted and let his cheeks turn a crimson red. He turned his head and smiled a little. He breathed in and turned back to her. Was he about to do what he just did? Was he.... Could he? Riku reached over, gently took her chin in his hand and turned her head toward him. He lightly kissed her lips. He felt a sudden warmth in his body and he didn't know how to react. He pulled back and looked at her. He turned his attention back to teh piano and looked dwon at eth ivory keys. Should he play? "Um.... I-I'm sorry about that..."
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8:01pm Nov 30 2010
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Sunni gulped, then smiled, her golden hair falling all around her face.she realized she had never kissed,her heart jumped and she felt like she could fly, her golden eyes sparkled as she looked at him. “don’t be sorry”She got close to him and put her arms around him,laying her head on his shoulder then pulled away. “you know..ive never been kissed before.. ”She looked up at the night sky and hoped that this night would never end. She thought about Rikus home, life the abuse he had at home,it made her ache.She turned and put her hand oh his “why do you stay if you dad causes so much pain” her eyes showed pain and seriousness,she looked at his amazing silver eyes and wondered.
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9:07pm Nov 30 2010
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Riku looked at Sunni then at the stars, as if he was trying to avoid the question, when he was only hoping to find the right words to express why he stayed in such an aweful home. He closed his eyes. "Because my little brother lives there with me. He's my twin, but I'm older by about two minutes. I don't want my adoptive father to hurt him or hurt a single hair on his head. I can't tell him to up and leave because we've been adopted so many times before and I've always caused havoc to get us out, but this man wasn't like that. I caused havoc and he beat me, but he would not allow the child adoption agency to take us away because he really did like my younger brother as a son. If Kyin stays there alone, I fear that our adoptive father might try to hurt him if Kyin didn't do something right or cook the mean just right. I'm stayin gmostly becasue my brother stays. He's gotten into art and his art is all over his room, I don't want him to have to leave them or take them all done just to leave after he has worked so hard to paint and draw them and get them on his walls... So, simply, Kyin is he reason I stay in such a horrible place and because the adoptive father refuses to let me walk out of the door with the two people who helped him adopt us.." He looked at Sunni as though he was searching for satisfaction or some kind of answer. He let his hands gently braush the ivory keys of the piano. He knew if she continued to talk to him, too much would slip and he would start to play a sorrow filled song.
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1:05am Dec 5 2010
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bump..will reply tommarrow
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