Pride of the Eclipse


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reinabella

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ooc:// RIKA! *glomps*

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 At Fang's roar Jezebel emerges frombthe shadows, her gold eyes glowing faintly against the current darkness of her pelt, the pattern mostly hidden for now. She has called the darkness to her like a cloak, a second la
yer of fur. She dips into a bow as a way of greeting her alpha, though an irreverent grin plays on her muzzle. She seems completely unfazed by the tiger's roar, which would surely send a lesser being into shivers of fear.

"Greetings, Fang of the Moon. Do you jump so easily at shadows, or am I just truly capable of catching you unaware?"

Somewhere else in the forest Areli wanders, his bulk crashing through the trees without any attempt at stealth. He wants someone to hear him, wants someone to talk to. Anyone but the Alpha or his mentor, who would no doubt find some menial task that would surely be beneath him. Instead he seeks companionship elsewhere, ornamental wings tucked tight against his massive body.




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ooc:// Bumpage?



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Kazumi ran around in the shadows. To her they where her friends and kept her safe from those who would hurt her. She soon pounced into a shadow and landed near a lion with wings backing up abit she remained in the Shadows there must be a reason why the shadows sent her here then where she wanted to go. "Hello" she said in a quiet voice incase the lion attacked her she could quickly escape.

((awwww i think Kazumi might have a crush XD))




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As the hushed voice Areli turns, turning the force of his amber gaze upon the young panther. To him she seems a miniature of Jezebel, with apparently the same hold over the darkness. His wings shift against his back, rustling like silk and lace. His ears flick,ex
pression not unfriendly. He was not familiar with all the members of the pride, though he'd thought he'd remember someone so similar to his mentor in appearance and gift.
 
"Hello, I am Areli. I do not believe we have met."



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Kazumi took a step back. "N-no..... My name is Kazumi. I just hunt food for the pride and leave it where they can easily find it." She said to him quietly and holding in a shiver he scared her more than most of the other members did. She then moved back so that the shadows covered her completely. They where her friends and kept her company as well as safe from the others so she didn't have to talk to the others.




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(I might join this)



reinabella

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ooc:// Um, can I suggest that you work a bit on your grammar? Not to be overly critical, but you've made quite a few errors.



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((I think it's me XD. I am sorry i will try to do better but i am bad at grammer and that so if i make mistakes just tell me and i will fix them.))



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ooc:// I really do apologize, Fox, but with an English major as a mother, and all of her friends having been English teachers and whatnot, I was raised to be very, VERY picky about grammar. It's like... grammatical OCD. I get twitchy. ^-^'



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((So is it better? Or still some mistakes?))



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ooc:// Still mistakes. Did you try putting it through Word?



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((it said only one thing was wrong. and that was communicating))



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ooc:// ^-^ Nice touches.

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Areli's ears perk, like nets trying to catch a fish, only the fish his ears are trying to catch is the sound of her voice. He nods, respectful. Something in him reacts to the females gift, and he resists the urge to treat her the way he would his mentor. He steps towards her, trying to convey through his relaxed muscles and lowered head that he means no harm.

"How fascinating, that two in the pride should have such similar powers. I am a hunter as well, though my mentor is much more skilled than I. She, too, communicates with the shadow, though she treats the darkness as her servant rather than a friend."




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Kazumi's ears perked up. "There is another? I don't really know any of the other members of the pride" She said to him her voice getting more steady with seeing his relaxed look. She had a feeling that he wouldn't attack her, but to be sure she would stay near her friends. The shadows had often talked to her about another female in the pride like her, but mean where as Kazumi asks the shadows the other female demand's them.

(is that ok? I put it through word haha)




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ooc:// Very good! There are a few mistakes in the last sentance, but it's really coming along. I've been doing this for much too long. -_-'

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"Indeed. I don't talk to many of the others, either, though I see them here and there. I think it must be nice to not have to talk to anyone you don't want to."

He tilts his head, wings twitching again, as though uncomfortable with how friendly he's being. It's most unusual for Areli to talk first and attack second, so his body takes a moment to get accustomed to his calm demeanor.




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Kazumi nodded taking a step out of the shadows abit more. "it is nice, but it gets lonely as well" she said to him in a quiet voice. It really did get lonely for her and sometimes the shadows didn't talk making her feel more and more lonelier then what she had felt before.



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Something inside Areli's heart chipped a little, a la
yer of ice, perhaps. He lowered his head a little more, watching her with his deep, flashing eyes.
 
"I think, maybe, that you shouldn't be lonely anymore. Maybe... I could be with you. Then neither of us would be alone."
 
For the first time in his life Areli was vulnerable, and the thought sent a shiver of fear down his spine. Still, he held Kazumi's gaze, unblinking and afraid.



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Kazumi smiled at him letting out a small purr in happiness. "I would like that alot" she said to him happily. Her Heart felt lighter and warmer with the idea that he wanted to be her friend and she liked the feeling. She walked fully out of the shadows showing her shining black fur as she lay down near him showing that she trusted him and wanted to be with him.



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