((Alright. Here is my revised version of your hunting post, Zane:
As he walked through the territory, Zane happened to spot a plump rabbit dart past. He ccarefully began to stalk it, making sure each paw was placed carefully and noiselessly, pausing each time the rabbit looked around. When eh saw that the chance was right, he attacked, killing the rabbit with a swift bite to the neck, the sound of the bones snapping ringing in his ears. He let his teeth sink into the soft meat, the sweet taste of the rabbit's blood oozing into his mouth.
That's how many of the other people do it on here. See how much more detail you can put into it, eliminating the confusion? If you do ti like this, placing your character's name in the post somewhere to tell others which one it is, then it makes everything easier on the people you are roleplaying with. C:))
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