Name:Chardonnay

Gender:female

Pack:Ice 

Rank:Delta

Looks:

Age:20 years(wolf years)

Personality:Very helpful, alway comes up with new ideas. 

History: Her parents abondoned her, probably beacause of her splayed paw.

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Example... example. (Fail example, I know. Just couldn't come up with a sentence. xD)))

(both acepted!)

Kinta ran along the snow, she could see the large volcano in the distance. She skiped along the snow so quick that her legs were nothing but a slight red blur. Kinta saw a small dart of white as a rabbit shot to the right, fritened but idiotic. She ran after it, she usually didn't eat much since she was the smallest and so was one of the last to eat. She felt dirt under her claws and then pounced onto the rabbit giving it a quick bite to snape its neck. She layed down on the red ground, unknown to her was that she was on the border of fire pack territory.

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Chardonnay stared, scared. She saw the mas.sive volcanoes, because she had accidently wandered straight into fire pack territory. She turned around, and ran. She ran as fast as she could. She ran for hours, it seemed. I can't let them catch me!! she thought. She kept running, and she tripped over something large. "Watch it!" said Chardonnay. She turned around, and saw it was one of her own pack members. "Oh my gosh! I am so sorry, Kinta!" she said.

Kinta shook the dirt off of her fur. "No problem" She said quietly. She liked Chardonny. Even with he splayed paw she became the delta of the pack. Kinta licked a little bit of blood off of her muzzle. "Im sorry, i was doing patrols when a snow hare darted and i ran after it. You want some?" She showed the small half eaten rabbit behind her. She yawned, relaxed and full she was  preety happy right now.

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 Syra  started to walk twords home when a sound caght her attention. She herd wolves talking, she lowered her head and went closer to the sound. She looked over her sholder to the other wolves of her pack to wait for her to see the noise. Her side hurt terribly but she continued forword. As she drew closer she caght the sent of the blood of a fresh kill. She looked inbetween a bush and saw two Ice Pack wolves. One she reconized as the delta, she was a fighter and the other seemed to only be a runt. She stayed hidden, scarred to make a sound that will make them attack her. She was injured and it would not be much of a battle by herself...

(hmmmm)

Syra runs back to her pack, she snaps a few small  twigs but she thinks its worth it. "There are two Ice pack mutts on our territory. What should we do?" She was d perked u[a little worried, she has only seen a few since she started as the alfha.

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Kinta heard a few snaps and her head perked up and she looked around. "Did you hear anything?" She took a small sep twords the noise. It wasn't a rabbit, it sounded much larger. She looked around her and made a small yip, the ground was red dirt, trees were scattered across the surface, she was in fire pack teritory.

"Ice pack?  Well if we don't fight them, they might just keep coming back. But on the flip side, if we fight them, we might not win. But then again, it's only two..." Ash said.

((I would've posted more, but I gtg.))

Chardonnay immediatly stood up.

"Yes, i did. We better stay were we are, it won't be a good idea to go further in Firepack territory. You know what the could do to us if they found us." she said.

"I can reconize one is the delta with the splayed paw and the other i think is a runt, i think we can take them but do you think we can with our wounds? I don't want us to get hurt more." Syra says in an adverage tone, not showing any fear, even thogh she was a little scared.

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 "I hope it was just a fox or something, i dont want to face any wolves. I have never fought onne outside our pack..." Kinta said a little fritened, she was pretty sure it was a wolf she heard but it ran away, hopefully it was a pup straying to the borders of there territory.

"Wait, Fire pack is weak now! We can easily fight them and maybe win!" exclaimed Chardonnay. She walked past the border and bumped right into a Firepack wolf. She jumped up and attacked it. It screeched under her weight.

((ooc; i think it was Ash or Syra.))

((To say the fire pack wolf screeched under her weight is taking over that players Charrie. (Unless its a Npc) :/))

(ya justsaying its a LITTLE agenst the rules.....)