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im having trouble thinking of words 4 my song. HELP ME!


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ashdog554

11:18pm Jul 30 2009 (last edited on 1:58am Aug 1 2009)

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ok heres how it starts:
They want me to think what they think,
They want to change me
why wont they just go away?
i wanna say "Im going to think what i want to think, theres nothing you can do about that.
you wont get into my head
so why not just dissappear? just go away!"
and thats where i stopped to think about other things
but whatever i think they wont stop crossing my mind
and when they cross my mind its me edgey
why wont they keave me alone,
and let me do my own thing?
why cant i have it my way?
it makes me wanna say "im going to think what i wanna think.
theres nothing you can do about that.
you wont get into my head
so why not just dissappear? just go away!
and when i go to school the next day
i cant do it my way
and for someone to be so shallow and be that way
it makes me wanna say" im going to think what i want to think.
theres nothing you can do about that.
you wont get into my head
so why not just dissappear? Just go away!
it dosent mean anything to me that they call me a freak
it dosent mean anything that they hate me
im going to be what i do best
and thats being me
it makes me wanna say "i dont care what you say and i never will
theres nothing you can do about that.
you say what you wanna say. it dosent matter to me
ill think what i think, you think what you think
it dosent matter...




i think this is good if any1 think i could change or add somthing just say so


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Knux64echidna

12:40pm Jul 31 2009

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Wow... Strong lyrics.  I'm not much of a song writer, but I like to make limericks.  I'll help you think.  I'm confused where you left off, though.


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 _Ranvier

10:02pm Jul 31 2009 (last edited on 10:06pm Jul 31 2009)

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"And I make little motions from time to time

To give them a note, to let them define

The meaning means nothing to anyone but me

I'm inside a place where I can't really be free

I just want to think what I think, and feel what I feel

And know for sure that it all is so real

But here where I am, trapped inside this world

Some things are impossible

This place won't unfurl..."

 

First time I've ever written anything to be in a song.

xD

Sounds sorta like a rap, despite myself hating raps.

And it is a little different from the style you have.

But yeah, it was fun to make.

I might continue it, so I'd rather you didn't use it, sorry.

But maybe it will give you ideas?




ashdog554

12:52am Aug 1 2009

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it does give me ideas


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 _Ranvier

1:05am Aug 1 2009

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Glad that it did. ^_^
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