My dragon story- if you luv dragons, u might like this!


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smoosh22

5:16am Jul 16 2010 (last edited on 5:19am Jul 16 2010)

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Hey, I've written this cool story. This is only a little bit. If you like it, leave a comment and i might just post more! Winktle="Wink" />

Prologue

The dragons visited earth a long time ago, in the Mesozoic period, the age of the dinosaurs. They could use secret warp tunnels, hidden in the ground where only the dragons knew of them. They wished to expand their population to other planets, but couldn’t find any planet that it was possible that they could exist on that they liked, as dragons are exceedingly fussy, some lacking enough greenery, some with terrain too rough, others uninhabited.

 Then they came to Earth. But the superior dragons were not impressed with the dinosaurs, and found most of them rude and disgusting, or at the very least uncivilised. So they returned to their own planet, which orbited the star Mirphos.

 Another few billion years later, Mirphos was due to explode. A party was sent back to Earth to re-examine this candidate planet to relocate to. When they got there, they discovered the human population. This, they were impressed with, as this species was obviously quite advanced, and refined. But when the dragons revealed themselves with pride to the human race, many men turned on them immediately, killing some in their distrustfulness.

Half that weren’t injured escaped and fled the globe but the other half were blinded by first impressions, and made to reason with the humans, and so went into hiding.

 Though men in general never changed their ideas and, though a few welcomed the dragons, eventually all were slain.

So what happened to those who took flight from Earth? Put simply, they discovered a world where they could finally dwell in peace, Nicoshaul.

But there was one thing this paradise lacked...adventure, the one thing that coursed through the blood of all dragons. It was in their nature to go out and learn about the universe. Yet none dared to leave the safety of Nicoshaul. That is, until the new king was born, Rakisho...

 




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smoosh22

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Sorry, the paragraphs aren't working. Hang on, I'll try 2 fix it.



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smoosh22

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YAY! Fixed!



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kitten0822

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so what goes next?




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smoosh22

9:12pm Jul 16 2010 (last edited on 9:17pm Jul 16 2010)

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You like?! Cool! Hang on, here's Chapter 1. I'm thinking of combining it with Chapter 3 once I've written it, coz Chapter 1's a little short.

Chapter 1- Rozashae’s Room

Rozashae lay in bed, thinking, staring at the ceiling, decorated with glow in the dark stickers. It was a cold night, very cold, and Rozashae couldn’t sleep. But it wasn’t just the temperature keeping her awake; tomorrow- well, today, since the sun was starting to rise- was the day her school project was due. She had hardly done anything!

 Aww, man.  Mr. Kramer's going to kill me, thought Rozashae, what am I going to do?!She had always got straight A’s, and her parents expected that from her. Now she was probably going to get an F.

Rozashae hopped out of bed and wandered- on tip-toes, so as not to wake her parents- over to the window. Pulling apart the curtains, she glanced out at a view of Mt. Ponte Gorge, with the sun peeping over the horizon behind it. For nearly as far as the eye could see, all there was was trees, trees, and more trees, all part of the Blue Mountains bushland. In the distance Rozashae could just spot a few skyscrapers, the only visible proof that the city of Sydney existed.

 If only she could be like a possum, or other bush animal, and not have to worry about stupid school projects, or anything else human, for that matter.

Heading back to bed she grabbed her special cuddly octopus; made from a sock, she had brought it into existence herself. It was her favourite toy, despite it being very simple and not as soft as the others. 

Going by the mirror, Rozashae stopped and looked into it, staring at her unhappy-looking reflection. She saw a girl standing there, small for her age, with thousands of freckles on unnaturally red skin, wearing kiddie spectacles over syrupy eyes. Her teeth were long, and strangely sharp, and she wore braces because her teeth had grown to overlap each other. Her hair was long and flowing, but didn’t shine with a healthy radiance like other girls’, and was flat and dull and a fiery red. It was this...different appearance, and the weird name as well, that caused her to be the target of most of the popular girls’ taunts. She didn't fit in anywhere.Rozashae trudged back, climbed into bed and fell into a deep, but disturbed sleep, with nightmares of bullies and bad marks. When she awoke her alarm was going off, and she could hear her parents downstairs, arguing in high whispers.

Ta-da! Laughingtle="Laughing" />




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smoosh22

9:13pm Jul 16 2010

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Dang, no paragraphs again!! I'm fixing now.



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ssgarcia97

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Um, I think this belongs in the "Writing" forum.



kakelover

5:45pm Jul 17 2010

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Yea, garcia is right



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Mechromancer

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Ya.



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smoosh22

2:54am Jul 20 2010

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Oh, didn't realise there was a Writing forum! How do I move it? Embar*censored*edtle="Embar*censored*ed" />



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smoosh22

2:34am Jul 24 2010

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Plz help! hang on, i'll explore! I'll see wat i can do...Undecidedtle="Undecided" />



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smoosh22

4:56am Jul 25 2010

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no, can't find it!



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ssgarcia97

10:02am Jul 25 2010

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If you mean you can't find the '"Writing" forum, it's under the "Drawing and Writing" category thing.

And about moving your story, what I would do is copy the story and paste it in a new thread in the "Writing" forum.




smoosh22

5:31am Jul 26 2010

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ok, i didn't mean i can't find Writing. It's ok, I do wat u said.



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