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3:18pm Jan 18 2010
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O_O I know sorry *hugs*
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3:22pm Jan 18 2010
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I also can't wait to learn to type properly when I'm not writing something for a story XD. Ignore the typos I make here, I'm not paying attention to what I'm typing half the time, need to work on that. Honestly, restults, what was I thinking?
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3:23pm Jan 18 2010
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(( sugar...... you know..... roleplay....))
http://cdn3.knowyourmeme.com/i/000/112/872/original/mlp%20guess.jpg?1302464203
OH MAH GIZZLE. ANGEL'S BACK.
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3:44pm Jan 18 2010
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shugg: I'll finish your order anyway in case you change your mind again.. I'll put you on the bottom of the list so evryone else doesn't have to wait
Wolf: lol we all do it xp for example, I used to type lyk dis til it strtd efcting my wrting in cl*censored* nd finlly stpd (lol, I left out vowels, used letters, and abbreviated a lot!)
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8:28pm Jan 18 2010 (last edited on 8:41pm Jan 18 2010)
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9:58pm Jan 18 2010
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XD I have a suggestion for the auction piece on how to make it look even better, but I don't wanna overstep my bounds, so I'll ask if I can first.
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10:23pm Jan 18 2010
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Wolf: Oh rly? I'm always open to critique so please, go ahead and suggest away ^^ (I wouln't have noticed the deformed hand if it wasn't for you pointing it out for me xD)
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11:36pm Jan 18 2010
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Lol, the tail is really nice, but the way you lined the hair is a little spaztic. The strands are one style and the outline is another style. If you want a hard border (no loose strands, just a wavy line) on the bangs and the rest of the hair (more the parts that we usually see going crazy like the bangs), the way you lined the strands is a little strange. To me it seems like the way the strands are lined the bangs should be less of a wavy line at the ends and more having gaps and stuff.... it's kinda hard to explain, I'll find a picture to show you what I mean (this picture will not be mine, I take absolutely no credit for it). http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20girl/keinzdash/kawaii%20anime/anime_girl.jpg?o=3 see how her bangs aren't one big block but are separated and the bottom isn't a solid wavy line but more like jagged pieces? The way you line your hair that's what I would think would look best, but that's just my opinion (still great picture though, don't get me wrong).
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11:57pm Jan 18 2010
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Ah I see...I thought you were going to mention how one of her eyes is smaller than the other or how the tail is poorly shaded..but yes I know what you mean with the hair. Hair is my other weakness. I've tried the serperate strans and all that, but it takes longer and never looks right when I do it. The picture has a lot of flaws, but I think the hair is one thing that may be too late to fix. Simply changing its color would be a h*censored*le.
Now that I look at her (again) One of her shoulders are deformed one of her legs are bending awkwardly, her hand STILL isn't right XP and the overall shading isn't that great (esspecially the clothes)
Thanks for the critique =) I appreciate it and will remember it for future ref.
Hair, hands, and shading are my enemies >.<
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12:08am Jan 19 2010
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Lol, I was leaving those smaller details alone because I thought you would catch them, the hair is something people overlook a lot soooo, I figured I'd throw that out there. :p
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12:11am Jan 19 2010 (last edited on 12:12am Jan 19 2010)
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Wolf: lol thx for being a trusty non-overlooking critiquer 'u'
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9:21pm Jan 19 2010
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Eeek! how'd it get all the way down here?? ;.;
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10:28pm Jan 19 2010 (last edited on 10:29pm Jan 19 2010)
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sketchy
Wolf: http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk240/smokeydbird/scan0015.jpg (2nt pic) Two in one ;p if you don't like neither I can make make another sketch. (In case you haven't noticed I'm not too fond of wolves. ]X )
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11:16pm Jan 19 2010
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Lol, I like them (not super fond of the tongue sticking out on the bottom one, but other than that it's excellent).
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11:29pm Jan 19 2010
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lol i was having fun with it =p It can be easily removed when clean it up. So the first one?
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11:40pm Jan 19 2010
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-Stalks- Wolfspi dislikes da tongue, eh? Tongues are cool...Live with it >( lol Just Kidding.
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8:48am Jan 20 2010
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Heh, wolfspi likes both of them very much (again except the tongue *shoves back in mouth*) Whichever you choose to color is fine with me. I don't think you're bad at wolves, no idea why you say you are.
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5:26pm Jan 20 2010
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sorry i wasnt on for a while
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5:28pm Jan 20 2010 (last edited on 5:30pm Jan 20 2010)
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I love the line Art! wheres the html? i sent the tu.
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5:31pm Jan 20 2010
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Oh good, your back ^^ I'll send you it now
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